Lou, the Prophet
It had been a very trying summer to every one, and most of all to Lou. He had been in
the West for seven years, but he had never quite gotten over his homesickness for Denmark.
Among the northern people who emigrate to the great west, only the children and the old
people ever long much for the lands they have left over the water. The men only know that
in this new land their plow runs across the field tearing up the fresh, warm earth, with
never a stone to stay its course. That if they dig and delve the land long enough, and if
they are not compelled to mortgage it to keep body and soul together, some day it will be
theirs, their very own. They are not like the southern people; they lose their love for
their fatherland quicker and have less of sentiment about them. They have to think too
much about how they shall get bread to care much what soil gives it to them. But among
even the most blunted, mechanical people, the youths and the aged always have a touch of
romance in them.
Lou was only twenty-two; he had been but a boy when his family left Denmark, and had
never ceased to remember it. He was a rather simple fellow, and was always considered less
promising than his brothers; but last year he had taken up a claim of his own and made a
rough dugout upon it and he lived there all alone. His life was that of many another young
man in our country. He rose early in the morning, in the summer just before daybreak; in
the winter, long before. First he fed his stock, then himself, which was a much less
important matter. He ate the same food at dinner that he ate at breakfast, and the same at
supper that he ate at dinner. His bill of fare never changed the year round; bread,
coffee, beans and sorghum molasses, sometimes a little salt pork. After breakfast he
worked until dinner time, ate, and then worked again. He always went to bed soon after the
sunset, for he was always tired, and it saved oil. Sometimes, on Sundays, he would go over
home after he had done his washing and house cleaning, and sometimes he hunted. His life
was as sane and as uneventful as the life of his plow horses, and it was as hard and
thankless. He was thrifty for a simple, thickheaded fellow, and in the spring he was to
have married Nelse Sorenson's daughter, but he had lost all his cattle during the winter,
and was not so prosperous as he had hoped to be; so, instead she married her cousin, who
had an "eighty" of his own. That hurt Lou more than anyone ever dreamed.
A few weeks later his mother died. He had always loved his mother. She had been kind to
him and used to come over to see him sometimes, and shake up his hard bed for him, and
sweep, and make his bread. She had a strong affection for the boy, he was her youngest,
and she always felt sorry for him; she had danced a great deal before his birth, and an
old woman in Denmark had told her that was the cause of the boy's weak head.
Perhaps the greatest calamity of all was the threatened loss of his corn crop. He had
bought a new corn planter on time that spring, and had intended that his corn should pay
for it. Now, it looked as though he would not have corn enough to feed his horses. Unless
rain fell within the next two weeks, his entire crop would be ruined; it was half gone
now. All these things together were too much for poor Lou, and one morning he felt a
strange loathing for the bread and sorghum which he usually ate as mechanically as he
slept. He kept thinking about the strawberries he used to gather on the mountains after
the snows were gone, and the cold water in the mountain streams. He felt hot someway, and
wanted cold water. He had no well, and he hauled his water from a neighbor's well every
Sunday, and it got warm in the barrels those hot summer days. He worked at his haying all
day; at night, when he was through feeding, he stood a long time by the pig stye with a
basket on his arm. When the moon came up, he sighed restlessly and tore the buffalo pea
flowers with his bare toes. After a while, he put his basket away, and went into his hot,
close, little dugout. He did not sleep well, and he dreamed a horrible dream. He thought
he saw the Devil and all his angels in the air holding back the rain clouds, and they
loosed all the damned in Hell, and they came, poor tortured things, and drank up whole
clouds of rain. Then he thought a strange light shone from the south, just over the river
bluffs, and the clouds parted, and Christ and all his angels were descending. They were
coming, coming, myriads and myriads of them, in a great blaze of glory. Then he felt
something give way in his poor, weak head, and with a cry of pain he awoke. He lay
shuddering a long time in the dark, then got up and lit his lantern and took from the
shelf his mother's Bible. It opened of itself at Revelation, and Lou began to read, slowly
indeed, for it was hard work for him. Page by page, he read those burning, blinding,
blasting words, and they seemed to shrivel up his poor brain altogether. At last the book
slipped from his hands and he sank down upon his knees in prayer, and stayed so until the
dull gray dawn stole over the land and he heard the pigs clamoring for their feed.
He worked about the place until noon, and then prayed and read again. So he went on
several days, praying and reading and fasting, until he grew thin and haggard. Nature did
not comfort him any, he knew nothing about nature, he had never seen her; he had only
stared into a black plow furrow all his life. Before, he had only seen in the wide, green
lands and the open blue the possibilities of earning his bread; now, he only saw in them a
great world ready for the judgment, a funeral pyre ready for the torch.
One morning, he went over to the big prairie dog town, where several little Danish boys
herded their fathers' cattle. The boys were very fond of Lou; he never teased them as the
other men did, but used to help them with their cattle, and let them come over to his
dugout to make sorghum taffy. When they saw him coming, they ran to meet him and asked him
where he had been all these days. He did not answer their questions, but said: "Come
into the cave, I want to see you."
Some six or eight boys herded near the dog town every summer, and by their combined
efforts they had dug a cave in the side of a high bank. It was large enough to hold them
all comfortably, and high enough to stand in. There the boys used to go when it rained or
when it was cold in the fall. They followed Lou silently and sat down on the floor. Lou
stood up and looked tenderly down into the little faces before him. They were old-faced
little fellows, though they were not over twelve or thirteen years old, hard work matures
boys quickly.
"Boys," he said earnestly, "I have found out why it don't rain, it's
because of the sins of the world. You don't know how wicked the world is, it's all bad,
all, even Denmark. People have been sinning a long time, but they won't much longer. God
has been watching and watching for thousands of years, and filling up the phials of wrath,
and now he is going to pour out his vengeance and let Hell loose upon the world. He is
burning up our corn now, and worse things will happen; for the sun shall be as sackcloth,
and the moon shall be like blood, and the stars of heaven shall fall, and the heavens
shall part like a scroll, and the mountains shall be moved out of their places, and the
great day of his wrath shall come, against which none may stand. Oh, boys! the floods and
the flames shall come down upon us together and the whole world shall perish." Lou
paused for breath, and the little boys gazed at him in wonder. The sweat was running down
his haggard face, and his eyes were staring wildly. Presently, he resumed in a softer
tone, "Boys, if you want rain, there is only one way to get it, by prayer. The people
of the world won't pray, perhaps if they did God would not hear them, for they are so
wicked; but he will hear you, for you are little children and are likened unto the kingdom
of heaven, and he loved ye."
Lou's haggard, unshaven face bent toward them and his blue eyes gazed at them with
terrible earnestness.
"Show us how, Lou," said one little fellow in an awed whisper. Lou knelt down
in the cave, his long, shaggy hair hung down over his face, and his voice trembled as he
spoke:
"Oh God, they call thee many long names in thy book, thy prophets; but we are only
simple folk, the boys are all little and I am weak headed ever since I was born,
therefore, let us call thee Father, for thy other names are hard to remember. O Father, we
are so thirsty, all the world is thirsty; the creeks are all dried up, and the river is so
low that the fishes die and rot in it; the corn is almost gone; the hay is light; and even
the little flowers are no more beautiful. O God! our corn may yet be saved. O, give us
rain! Our corn means so much to us, if it fails, all our pigs and cattle will die, and we
ourselves come very near it; but if you do not send rain, O Father, and if the end is
indeed come, be merciful to thy great, wicked world. They do many wrong things, but I
think they forget thy word, for it is a long book to remember, and some are little and
some are born weak headed, like me, and some are born very strong headed, which is near as
bad. Oh, forgive them their abominations in all the world, both in Denmark and here, for
the fire hurts so, O God! Amen."
The little boys knelt and each said a few blundering words. Outside, the sun shone
brightly and the cattle nibbled at the short, dry grass, and the hot wind blew through the
shriveled corn; within the cave, they knelt as many another had knelt before them, some in
temples, some in prison cells, some in the caves of earth, and One, indeed, in the garden,
praying for the sin of the world.
The next day, Lou went to town, and prayed in the streets. When the people saw his
emaciated frame and wild eyes, and heard his wild words, they told the sheriff to do his
duty, the man must be mad. Then Lou ran away; he ran for miles, then walked and limped and
stumbled on, until he reached the cave; there the boys found him in the morning. The
officials hunted him for days, but he hid in the cave, and the little Danes kept his
secret well. They shared their dinners with him, and prayed with him all day long. They
had always liked him, but now they would have gone straight through fire for him, any one
of them, they almost worshipped him. He had about him that mysticism which always appeals
so quickly to children. I have always thought that bear story which the Hebrews used to
tell their children very improbable. If it was true, then I have my doubts about the
prophet; no one in the world will hoot at insincere and affected piety sooner than a
child, but no one feels the true prophetic flame quicker, no one is more readily touched
by simple goodness. A very young child can tell a sincere man better than any
phrenologist.
One morning, he told the boys that he had had another "true dream." He was
not going to die like other men, but God was going to take him to himself as he was. The
end of the world was close at hand, too very close. He prayed more than usual that day,
and when they sat eating their dinner in the sunshine, he suddenly sprang to his feet and
stared wildly south, crying, "See, see, it is the great light! the end comes!! and
they do not know it; they will keep on sinning, I must tell them, I must!"
"No, no, Lou, they will catch you; they are looking for you, you must not
go!"
"I must go, my boys; but first let me speak once more to you. Men would not heed
me, or believe me, because my head is weak, but you have always believed in me, that God
has revealed his word to me, and I will pray God to take you to himself quickly, for ye
are worthy. Watch and pray always, boys, watch the light over the bluffs, it is breaking,
breaking, and shall grow brighter. Goodbye, my boys, I must leave ye in the world yet
awhile." He kissed them all tenderly and blessed them, and started south. He walked
at first, then he ran, faster and faster he went, all the while shouting at the top of his
voice, "The sword of the Lord and of Gideon!"
The police officers heard of it, and set out to find him. They hunted the country over
and even dragged the river, but they never found him again, living or dead. It is thought
that he was drowned and the quicksands of the river sucked his body under. But the little
Dane boys in our country firmly believe that he was translated like Enoch of old. On
stormy nights, when the great winds sweep down from the north they huddle together in
their beds and fancy that in the wind they still hear that wild cry, "The sword of
the Lord and of Gideon."
First published in The Hesperian, XXII (October 15, 1892), 7-10.
Reproduced from Virginia Faulkner, ed, Willa Cather's Collected Short Fiction
1892-1912.
Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press, 1970, 535-40.
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